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Feedback on newspaper website
English Subject page feedback. Reviewed by my Dad on Saturday Oct 18
French Subject page feedback. Reviewed by my Dad on Friday Oct 24
1. Increase the size of the pictures so they can be the same size.
2. Center the titles so they can be aligned in the proper position.
3. Add punctuation to text
4. Change some grammar errors
5. Remove repetitiveness for some words
6. Align the texts, and pictures so that it can look even.
7. Move pictures away from the edge.
1. Make image sizes consistent
2. Bold headline titles
3. Change some Grammar in the body text
4. Fix Punctuation errors
French webpage feedback by Brian Dai
1. color doesn't reflect the brand evidence
2. No alt text
3. put pictures next to each other
4. no icons
5. hierarchy not good size
6. The content of the presentation is very unclear
7. weak structure on text and also inconsistent
8. text is unclear
9. introduction lacks significance
10. explanation needs improvement
11. the text lacks depth
12. limited explanation and examples
13. too few examples in the text
14. conclusion is too vague
15. no significance
16. information is superficial and lacked clarity.
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